shhh...
Over dinner, he calls.
You put on that face that you save for him.
I am as quiet as a mouse
Praying he won’t hear me.
All at once, I am
Your late night with the boys,
Your personal traffic jam,
Your surprise meeting with the boss.
In bed, I hear his key in your door.
You put on that face that you save for him.
I am as quiet as a mouse.
Praying he won’t see me.
I am under your bed
My clothes in a rumpled pile by my feet.
I listen for your footsteps
And his
So that I can weep hot tears in peace.
But not now. Not yet.
For right now, I need to be
As quiet as a mouse.
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Woah...
ReplyDeleteSpeak up little boy speak up.
That also used to be me...
These melancholic rainy days,waahhh..
i know right. brings back memories. haha
ReplyDeleteay fiction pala yan. bwahahaha
cge just keep quiet till the cat eats the mouse LOL!
ReplyDeleteganda ng pic
ohhh... the other one :)
ReplyDeleteso how'd the night end?
@Mac or 'till the mouse starts playing with beings from his own genome.
ReplyDelete@Ash probably with the narrator sneaking out and going home alone.
i never knew this song until my partner introduced me to it...
ReplyDeleteyang picture kasi eh.... victoria's court lang tuloy rumerehistro sa utak ko hahahahaha
ReplyDeleteit was nice seeing you last nite... jacket jacketan... TSE!!! hihihihi
very tragic.
ReplyDelete@The Geek It's a nice song. I had a lot of assumptions on what it was about. Apparently it's about the United States and the current state of the country. It's deliciously ambiguous. :D
ReplyDelete@YJ haha whudabout victoria's court? haha was nice seeing you, too. bago jacket eh. haha
@LOF thanks for reading. :D yeah, it was a tragic time. ay fiction pala to. bwahahaha
everyone's been doing a lot of poems lately. prose, whatever. you get my point ahihih :-p
ReplyDeletemoda yan. kaw na rin. haha
ReplyDeleteHmmm, mabigat sa dibdib ang poym.
ReplyDeletetignan mo picture sa logo ng victora's court.... ganyan na ganyan ahihihihihi
ReplyDelete@Mr. Komplikado thanks. compliment ata yan. haha if it's worth anything, mabigat din siya isulat.
ReplyDelete@YJ wala namang balbas yun! haha nahanap ko lang din yan sa google eh.
do i smell fear or self-preservation?
ReplyDeleteit's probably both although it's more of the former.
ReplyDeletehhmmm... seems like tha cat just came back and stopped the mouse's foreplay este play... jk!
ReplyDeletenice one!
haha talk about major blueball.
ReplyDelete@MAC AND CB...pansinin niyo po yung dates nung mga nakalagay na statements ni kenny...at balikan niyo po yung post ko about him na 'emo mode' dated may 16...mas maiintindihan niyo po yung story...
ReplyDeletelahat po nung nakalagay na statements na yun ay mula sa lahat ng friendster comments na ipinadala niya...
at nagulat na lang ako ng basahin ko ng isa-isa..may nabuong istorya..sabayan pa ng music na maririnig sa blog ko
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ReplyDeleteshit. this left needles in my heart, nyl. epektib!!
ReplyDelete@LOF I know right. I think period had a problem with the submit button.. or was that your way of telling me to remove my poem. :c huhu
ReplyDelete@Gentle thanks! :D baka naipit lang kaya nag pins and needles.
hahaha. i was just teasing period.
ReplyDeletephew. that's good to hear. hey, i'm about to send you an email.
ReplyDeletenice meeting you citybouy!!! hehehe
ReplyDeletenice to meet u, too ewik! sana next time makapaug-usap tayo. haha
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